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课件网) What will my life be like in 20 years? 版本：北师大课标版 年级：八年级下册第一单元 How time flies! Ms. wang Jim Jim, please write a composition about your life in 20 years. OK. Let me think of it. Focus on the structure Try to remember more information 关注结构 多记信息 Jim's life in 20 years Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 Jim’s life in twenty years Talk about our/my life in twenty years P1 introduction How old will Jim be? He will be_____ years old. What kind of person will Jim be? He will be a _____ and _____person. In twenty years 34 successful happy P2 Work or job What will Jim be? What will Jim do? He will be a_____ . , In twenty years businessman What will he do in his job? He will _____his own website _____ his job very much because he loves _____ the net. _____to the office very often. _____ from home according to his own timetable not need to _____ early _____work until late at night. In twenty years set up enjoy surfing not go work wake up be able to P3 Family Where will he live? What will he do with his family? He will leave _____. live in his own _____. live near his _____. visit his parents often. have a _____ trip together every year. home flat parents family In twenty years P4 spare time What will Jim do in his spare time? He will read _____. _____ around. play _____ with his friends go swimming at the swimming pool _____ his home. books travel football near In twenty years P5 conclusion Will Jim enjoy his life? Why or why not? Yes. He will. He will enjoy his life a lot Because he will _____ his time how he wants to His life will be so _____ and _____ In twenty years spend exciting comfortable Make your own mind-map Work in groups. Brain storm as many words as possible about work, family and hobbies. In twenty years, I will be thirty-four years old. I think I will be a successful and happy person. introduction Tips: 1. Be brief in the beginning. 2. Use some adjective to make your writing lively. conclusion I will enjoy my life a lot because I will spend my time how I want to. Life will be so exciting and comfortable. Tips: 1. Come back to the topic. 2. Use some clauses to make your writing better. Use the link words and sentence phrases I will be a businessman then and will set up my own website. I will enjoy my job very much because I love surfing the net… I will leave home and live in my own flat. However, I will live near my parents and I will visit them often. Every year, we will have a family trip together. ⅡMake feelings stronger Construction I will be a... writer famous writer who is popular among the readers in 20 years I have confidence that Time to show your own composition pay attention to the structure use the useful phrases and sentences write about 80 words. · 13-15 marks · 9-12 marks · 4-8 marks · 0-3 marks assessment of composition √ Group Work 9-12 marks 第二档：符合题目要求，整篇表达清楚，语法错误较少。9-12分。 Pay attention to the spelling, rem ... ...
