(
课件网) 书面表达 --How to write a letter of advice Step1 Lead-in If you have trouble in doing something, who would you like to turn to for advice/suggestions? 你的朋友Annie最近总是感觉身体不适，询问你如何保持身体健康。 Annie最近总是感觉身体不适，询问你如何保持身体健康。 1.Annie: 提出问题 2.你：提供方案（建议） 问题（常用语块） 1.在做某事时遇到困难 have difficulty/trouble in doing sth 2.向某人征求意见 ask sb. for advice/turn to sb for advice 方案（常用语块） 1.保持健康饮食 keep a balanced diet 2.多做运动 do more physical exercise 3.好好休息 have a good rest 4.不要熬夜 not to stay up late 5.对生活保持积极的态度 keep a positive attitude towards life Annie最近总是感觉身体不适，询问你如何保持身体健康。 建议信开头常用句式和套话： 1.I am sorry to know that ... 2. I’m glad to receive your letter .You have asked me for my advice on how to … Here is my advice. 表达建议常用句式和套话： 1.Why not do...? 2.You'd better do... 3.I suggest that you should do… 4.It would be a good idea to do… 5.It is highly recommended that you should... 建议信的结尾常用句式和套话： 1.I hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful. 2.I do hope my advice will be of a little help to you. Step 2 Enjoy the possible version Dear Annie， I'm glad to receive your letter.But I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well these days. You asked me how to stay healthy.Here is my advice. (同情、安慰) First of all, you 'd better keep a balanced diet,which is beneficial to your health. What's more, taking regular exercise every day helps build up a strong body. Thirdly,for the benefit of your health you should have enough sleep and don't stay up too late at night. (建议) By eating properly and exercising regularly, you can keep your body healthy.I truly hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful and you'll get well soon. (希望) Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1.建议信的基本框架 第一段：表达你的同情和鼓励 第二段：建议的内容（提出建议的理由） 合情合理、有说服力、礼貌当先、 角度多样化 第三段：表达你的希望 2. linking words 表先后次序： (1) First...Second...Finally... (2) Firstly…Secondly…Thirdly… (3) First of all... What’s more...Last but not least 表递进关系： what’s more；moreover； besides； in addition；furthermore Step3.写作训练 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack正在为即将到来 的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写 信向你倾诉。请根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封 回信。 表达你的同情； 克服焦虑的建议； 预祝考试成功。 注意：词数100词左右 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 1 审题 1.文体 2.写作对象 3.人称 4.时态 5.写作要点 6.语言风格 2.谋篇布局 1.开头（Beginning) 2.中间（Body） 3.结尾（Ending) 3.拓展内容（建议） 1.小组合作列出建议 2.提出建议的理由 3.列出简要的中文提纲 4.列出英文词组、句型 Dear Jack, I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. I’d like to give you some advice. _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of the exams and perform well in the ... ...
