假设你是李华，你的美国笔友玛丽最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新环境，想家，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示给她写一封回信。 1.?表示理解并给予安慰；?? 2.?提出建议并说明理由。 注意：词数120左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。 如何写建议信 Dear Mary, I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. _____ _____ _____ _____ Yours, Li Hua 一、审题定调 这是一封建议信，它是生活中常用的一种应用文文体。建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第二人称。另外，提出的建议要合理，有说服性，语气要礼貌委婉。 二、谋篇布局 本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出，所以只需要写出正文即可。正文部分可分为三部分： 第一部分：引出话题（表示理解对方的处境并给予安慰，同时表明给对方建议的意愿）； 第二部分：提出建议（改变自己的一些习惯、认识更多的人及参加一些社会活动等）并说明理由； 第三部分：表达祝愿（希望自己的建议对对方有所帮助）。?????? 三、组织语言 1.?第一部分：引出话题。 普通表达 高级表达 ◆Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when ... ◆Don’t worry too much. ◆It is normal to get into such a situation when ... ◆There is no need to be anxious, as ... ◆Just take it easy. ◆Don’t? upset? yourself about it. 普通表达 高级表达 ◆I’d like to offer you some advice / suggestions. ◆Here are some suggestions /advice / tips for you. ◆The situation is easy to change if you follow / take my advice / suggestions. ◆I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. 2.?第二部分：提出建议并说明理由。 普通表达 高级表达 Try to change some of your habits. In this way, you will get used to the new environment?? quickly. Try to change some of your habits so that you can adapt to the new surroundings as soon as possible. 普通表达 高级表达 It is necessary? / important to go out and meet more people. As some people are very happy?? / pleased to share their hobbies and ideas with you, you will feel less homesick. Why not go out and meet more people? If you do this, you will find some people are more than willing to share their hobbies and ideas with you. This will help you get rid of / overcome your homesickness. You should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the local culture. It would be a good idea to participate in / involve yourself in some social activities, as this will give you the opportunity to learn more about the local culture. 3.?第三部分：表达祝愿。 普通表达 高级表达 ◆I hope you will find my advice / suggestions useful? / helpful.? ◆I hope you will consider my advice? / suggestions. ◆I hope my suggestions will be of use / help to you. ◆I hope you will take my advice / suggestions into consideration. ◆I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice / suggestions. 参考范文 Dear Mary, ?????? I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time.?It is normal to get into such a situation when people are in a new place, especially a foreign country. So just take it easy. The situation is easy to change if you follow my advice. First, try to change s ... ...
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