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课件网) 上课内容：读后续写———动作描写之“安慰、鼓励” 课型：高二写作课 Lead in kneel down on one knee take out the ring hand me a bunch of roses look at me affectionately ask, “Will you marry me ” Lead in notice the small flower———dandelion蒲公英 bend down reach out my hand pull it up hand it to him Compare He asked me to marry him. I sent him a dandelion. more vivid and interesting a little boring and plain(平淡) Main idea: My teacher changed my role from princess to narrator, which made me sad and disappointed. My mother led me into the yard, trying to encourage me and help me understand some real meaning of life. Read for the main idea What does the story mainly talk about when who what why where how 5 4 3 2 Time: Read for the theme and language I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden.” “But I like dandelions,” I protested(反对). “All flowers are beautiful———even dandelions.” My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn’t it ” She asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that. Relieved that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地). Tip 1: Use specific verbs and adverbs to make the actions more vivid. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden.” My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn’t it ” She asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Relieved that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地). What is the implied meaning(寓意) of my mother’s words Every role has its own importance, and we should try our best to do it. theme Tip 2: Use direct speech(直接引语) to reveal the theme. Relieved that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地). Plan the plot(情节) What will para. 1 mainly talk about Para. 1 “But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, Para. 2 After the play, I took home the flower. title：Mother’s Gift I felt cheered up, and performed well in the play. My mother continued to encourage me. My mother sent me the dandelion as a gift. Tip 3: Plan a logical and reasonable plot based on the two given sentences. Build up the word bank eyes: ①look at sb. gently in the e ... ...
