一、明喻让表达更活泼 1. The icy wind started howling， cutting my face like a sharp knife. （景物描写） 寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。 2. He walks like a duck， moving from side to side. （动作描写） 他走起路来像鸭子一样，左摇右摆。 3. Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels. （景物描写） 繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。 4. She was informed that her husband was seriously ill and she was anxious and restless， feeling like sitting on pins and needles. （情感描写） 她被告知她的丈夫病得很严重，她焦虑不安，如坐针毡。 5. I reached out to touch her face， which was as cold as the ice. （人物描写） 我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冷。 6. The bus went as slowly as a snail. （动作描写） 这辆公交车走得像蜗牛一样慢。 二、暗喻让句子有韵味 1. Life is an unexplored river，full of twists and turns. （哲理） 生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。 2. Time is money. 时间就是金钱。 3. Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face. 笑是太阳，把冬天从人们的脸上驱走。 4. A silver plate（＝The moon） is rising up in the sky. 一个银盘（月亮）从天边升起。 5. Books are the keys to your imagination. 书是你想象力的钥匙。 6. Her hair was a flowing golden river streaming down her shoulders. （肖像描写） 她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。 三、拟人让事物动感情 （一）自然景物拟人 1. The first day of this term found me on my way to school，beautiful flowers smiling and lovely birds singing in the wood. 这学期第一天上 学的路上，美丽的花儿在微笑，可爱的小鸟在林中歌唱。（句子更加生动，表达更富有情感） 2. The cold breath of autumn had blown away its leaves， leaving it almost bare. 萧瑟的秋风吹落了它的叶子，它几乎是光秃秃的。（语言表达生动、有力，让人有身临其境的感觉） （二）物体拟人 1. He glanced at the dew-covered grass，and it winked back at him. 他扫了一眼挂满露珠的青草，青草就向他眨了眨眼。 2. The clock on the wall ticked loudly and lazily， as if it had lots of time to spare. 墙上的挂钟懒洋洋地嘀嗒作响，声音那么大，好像有大量的时间可以打发。 3. Outside the window was a restless， whispering wind. 窗外是一阵躁动不安、窃窃私语的风。 4. The room became light and dark，for the moon was playing hide-and- seek with the clouds. 月亮与云彩玩着捉迷藏，房间里忽明忽暗。 四、夸张让气氛更深刻 （一）使用数词或量词 1. She was half dead with fear. （情感描写） 她吓得半死。 2. My heart broke in about a million pieces. 我的心碎成了百万片。 （情感描写） 3. I’ve told you a million times. 我都告诉你许多次了。 4. The backpack weighs a ton. 这个背包很重。 （二）使用动词 1. I almost laughed my head off. （情感描写） 我都快笑死了。 2. My blood froze. （情感描写） 我的血液都凝固了。 3. It made me jump out of my skin. （情感描写） 它吓得我魂不附体。 （三）使用形容词和副词 It’s beautiful， heavenly beautiful. （景物描写） 那儿很漂亮，就像天堂般漂亮。 （四）使用介词短语 1. On hearing it， he was in high spirits， and felt like being on the top of the world. 听了这话，他高兴极了，觉得自己站在世界之巅。 2. When they t ... ...
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