阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I am in the Navy, and several years ago I moved from Chicago, Illinois, to Meridian, Mississippi. I was at the airport, trying to get my boarding pass and check my bags. Because I was moving, I had almost all of my possessions with me. When I got to the counter, I found out there was a limit to the number of bags you can check without paying a fee. I had exceeded (超过) this limit by four bags. In order to get both myself and all of my things home, I would have to spend over $100. I didn’t have so much money with me, because I had just paid some of my bills and sent a few larger items home by mail. The airline employee told me she couldn’t do anything to help me. So I asked her where the nearest ATM was. She told me how to find the ATM and suggested I should go to the Airport Help Point for some help. There was just one staff member there, to whom I told my trouble. He apologetically told me there was nothing he could do. I started to cry because I didn’t know what was going to happen next. A fellow military gentleman was there using the amenities (便利设备), and he overheard me tell my story to the staff member. He came over and asked me for the story again. I told him, and we talked for a few minutes. He told me he was a parachuter (伞兵) in the army. And then he told me to go to the ATM to get my money. So I went, but I could only pull out eighty dollars. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When I got back, much to my surprise, the ticket counter told me the man had paid the entire fee for me. _____ Excitedly, I saw a familiar figure come into my sight, when waiting to pick up my luggage. _____ 一、文章大意 作者是一名海军,从伊利诺伊州芝加哥搬到密西西比州默里迪恩,在机场办理登机手续和托运行李时,发现行李超出免费托运数量限制四个包,需额外支付 100 多美元,但身上钱不够。航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员都表示无法帮忙,作者急得哭了。此时,一位同为军人的男士听到作者的遭遇,让作者去自动取款机取钱,而作者只能取出 80 美元。 二、故事山分析 开端:作者在机场面临行李超重需额外付费但钱不够的困境。 发展:作者先后向航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员求助无果,急得哭了,一位军人男士了解情况后让作者去取钱。 高潮:作者取钱回来发现那位男士帮自己支付了全部费用。 结局(预测):作者取行李时再次遇到那位男士,两人交流,表达感激与善意。 尾声(预测):作者感受到军人之间的情谊和社会的温暖,将这份善意铭记于心。 三、伏笔及在续写中的回应 伏笔 1:作者行李超重,钱不够支付额外费用。回应:为男士帮忙支付费用的情节做铺垫,突出男士帮助的必要性。 伏笔 2:航空公司员工和机场服务点工作人员都无法帮忙。回应:凸显作者困境的艰难,与男士的帮助形成鲜明对比。 伏笔 3:男士了解情况后让作者去取钱。回应:暗示男士可能会在钱的方面给予帮助,为后续他支付费用埋下伏笔。 伏笔 4:作者只能取出 80 美元。回应:进一步强调费用缺口,体现男士支付全部费用的慷慨。 伏笔 5:男士是军人。回应:可能因为同为军人的身份,男士更愿意伸出援手,也能体现军人之间的特殊情谊。 四、续写要点 第一段:着重描写作者得知男 ... ...
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