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河南省洛阳市2024-2025学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题:读后续写--荆棘徒步路,友情引归途 讲义素材

日期:2025-02-05 科目:英语 类型:高中素材 查看:63次 大小:24209B 来源:二一课件通
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河南省,读后,讲义,归途,友情,徒步路
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落的开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a fine day. My friend Henry and I set off on a short trip with a local as our guide. He said it would be a rather easy two-hour hike to see the Paiute trout(克拉克大马哈鱼)living in its natural living place. We believed what he had said and started out following him. But we later found it was a different story. When we three arrived at the place, Henry and I were worn out. However, we were not too tired to enjoy the excitement when we saw the colorful fish swimming freely there. I stood by the water and Henry took some photos of me with green plants and beautiful flowers. Time passed quickly. Before we knew it, it was getting late. The local guide told us that we could only appreciate the scenery (景色) for a brief while and then we had to go back to our car before dark. We had thought the rest of the hike should be relaxing. But it wasn’t as it was the steepest(最陡峭的) way that we’d faced so far. When we advanced, my huge backpack felt like a ton of stone. Both of my legs were really painful and tears ran out of my eyes. And there was another mountain ahead of us. As the sun began to set, my legs gave out completely. 注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Seeing that, Henry asked me to take one tiny step at a time. Finally, we climbed over the mountain. 文章大意 在一个晴朗的日子,“我” 和朋友亨利跟着当地向导去短途旅行,据说只需两小时轻松的徒步就能看到克拉克大马哈鱼的自然栖息地。但实际情况并非如此,到达目的地时 “我” 和亨利已疲惫不堪,可看到自由游动的鱼时还是很兴奋。向导提醒天黑前要返程,而返程之路是他们目前遇到的最陡峭的路。“我” 背着沉重的背包,双腿疼痛难忍,太阳开始落山时,“我” 的双腿完全不听使唤了。 故事山分析 开端:“我” 和亨利跟着向导开启短途旅行,听闻路途轻松,实则不然。 发展:到达目的地看到鱼很兴奋,但向导提醒要在天黑前返程,返程路是最陡峭的。 高潮:“我” 在返程途中因背包沉重、双腿疼痛,在太阳落山时双腿彻底不行了,这是故事的关键转折点,决定了后续的发展。 结局(待续写):要展现 “我” 在亨利的帮助下,是如何克服困难完成返程的,以及这次经历带来的感悟,体现坚持和友情的力量。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 向导说的轻松徒步与实际的艰难行程形成反差:在续写中,会进一步强调返程的艰难,突出这种反差,同时也会体现 “我” 和亨利在这种艰难情况下的坚持。 “我” 和亨利到达目的地时已疲惫不堪:在续写中,会影响 “我” 后续的体力和状态,增加克服困难的难度,而亨利的帮助也会更凸显友情的珍贵。 向导提醒要在天黑前返程:在续写中,会营造紧张的氛围,加快故事节奏,促使 “我” 和亨利必须尽快克服困难,增强故事的紧迫感。 返程路是最陡峭的:在续写中,是 “我” 面临的主要困难,也是亨利帮助 “我” 的主要场景,会详细描述攀爬陡峭山路的过程。 “我” 双腿疼痛难忍,最后完全不行了:在续写中,亨利的鼓励和帮助会围绕 “我” 的这个状态展开,是故事发展的重要线索,也会体现 “我” 从绝望到重新振作的过程。 续写要点 第一段:重点描述亨利如何鼓励 “我”,如他的语言、动作等,“我” 在他的鼓励下的心理变化,以及开始一小步一小步前进的过程,展现坚持的力量。 第二段:描述爬上 ... ...

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