英语培优3 学案 扩句技巧（展现、强动词）+培优二跟踪训练讲评 一 展现（感官描写、强动词等） 展现：show, do not tell 表达形象、生动、准确，有画面感 What is tell and show When you are telling, you’re supplying information by simply stating it陈述. You might report that a character is “tall,” or “angry,” or “cold,” or “tired.” Showing paints a picture the reader can see in her mind’s eye. Rather than telling that your character is angry, show it by describing his face flushing, his throat tightening, his voice rising, his slamming a fist on the table. 展现的表达手法 描写细节、具体表现 利用感官 尽量不用形容词和be动词、笼统动词 用强动词(stride, exclaim, weep, yell等) Examples: I am shocked. Hearing the unexpected news, I was struck dumb. / I was so shocked that words failed me. My classmates congratulated me on my success. My classmates whooped 激动地大叫and clapped their hands enthusiastically. The little girl was very happy to walk onto the stage to receive her prize. Hearing the news, she was on top of the world.She screamed in delight and jumped for joy.Striding onto the stage with her head high,she smiled from ear to ear.A wave of pleasure shot through her as she tasted the sweet joy of winning. My teacher praised me. My teacher gave me a thumb and said/praised: “Well done!” I was quite busy on my way to work. When I was driving through rush hour traffic, my left hand was on the steering wheel, while my right hand was arranging appointments on the cell phone. The next moment I was wrapping a birthday present at the traffic light. She felt cold. She pulled her collar up, tightened her scarf, shoved 随便放置，乱放her hands deep into her pockets and turned her face away from the biting wind. He was tired. He yawned and stretched his arms. His eyes looked puffy肿胀的. His shoulders slumped耷拉着. /“Didn’t you sleep last night You look shot筋疲力尽的.”, his mother asked. The old woman on the park bench is sad. The old woman on the park bench wept quietly. He cried. Tears of joy streamed down his cheeks. My mom is overprotective. My mom never lets me visit a friend’s house until she’s spoken to their parents first. One time, when she forgot that I was going on a trip with the math team after school, she got so worried, she almost called the police. Harry was worried that his schoolmates would laugh at his short hair. Harry spent a sleepless night imagining school the next day, where he was already laughed at for his baggy clothes and taped glasses. Kate was angry. Kate banged the table with her clenched fist, her face turning slightly red, screaming “Damn! I can’t believe it!” Roger was bored. Roger’s foot was tapping a steady rhythm onto the ground, and later he started doodling乱涂 on a sheet of paper. It seemed to him like the hour would never pass. The garden is beautiful. We enjoyed wild red and orange flowers as well as a thick and sweet smell in the garden./ The flowers were in full bloom, their blue and yellow petals bringing ... ...
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