英语培优2 学练案 审题、内容构建+扩句 一 审题、内容构建 （passage 2,3,4） 1.基于主题；故事山模型；契诃夫之枪；双线（情节线、情感线）；添加场景、心理描写； 2.情节设置合理（符合常理、符合人物年龄、身份） 3.利用衔接与连贯 4.Questions and answers 审题训练2 姐姐的成长 思路构建： Suddenly I saw two familiar figures walking towards me. Q1. Who were they What did they say and do My parents. They suggested having a picnic there. Q2. My responses. I greeted the suggestion with a jump. Q3. We were in the field with spring flowers. What happened later (to draw me closer to my parents and little sister) We made flower chains and joked with each other as before. Q4：last sentence of pra1: Rosa cried. / I approached the baby basket. Rosa was wide awake in her baby basket beside the picnic blanket. Q5. Describe Rosa. Cute./ She was crying with her arms waving and legs kicking. / she stopped crying and smiled at me. Q6. The shift of my feelings for her. Her pink cheeks and sweet smile melted my heart. Q7. What did I do I wound the flower chain around the handle of her baby basket. Q8: A proper ending. My former envy of Rosa gave way to my affection for her. I finally grew into the role of a big sisiter. 思路纠正 They were my mom and aunt. 围绕主要矛盾 I decided to take Rosa out to give her a lift. 情节合理性 Few flowers blossom overnight没有花儿能在一夜之间开放（我需要时间来接受我的妹妹）, but a garden can have blossoming flowers a whole year. I took Rosa out of the baby basket. I gave Rosa something to eat. Rosa was a little angry. 情节合理性Rosa is a one-month-old baby; I am a ten-year-old child ; My parents were there two. They led me to a park where we would have a picnic. The love you get from your parents never reduce. 审题训练3 邮差父亲 At one point Frank looked at me with tears in his eyes as if recalling something. Q1. Recalling what My father was the Santa Claus. Q2. My response I was surprised. Q3: Last sentence of para1: He talked about how my father tried his best to bring pleasure for others. Thinking of this philosophy of pleasure,I resolved to be this year’s Santa Claus. Q4. What did I do and say I opened the Santa Claus mailboxes and anwered the children’s letters. I delivered the letters. Q5. People’s response They were surprised but thrilled. They talked about my father. Q6: A proper ending. My feelings. / describe a scene. Wandering along the familiar road and recalling the past golden days, I felt somewhat sorrowful and comforted by this tender “adventure”. After waving them farewell, I slowed down my steps in the snow and wandered around the familiar road, mourning for the past golden days that would never fade away. 思路纠正 Frank talked about how great my dad was. 深刻理解 at one point I showed my thanks for his help and care to my father. 根据第二段预设第一段内容 Frank told me that I had better spread my dad’s spirit. 第二段首句理解不到位 二 扩句 写作比赛 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I won ... ...
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