英语培优5 学案 场景描写+寻找蜥蜴+培优4跟踪训练讲评 一 培优4跟踪训练扩句优化 消除流言 Without thinking twice,I made the decision to slowly approach him and make a sincere apology to him, which gave him an astonishment. 此处要有心理斗争 优化1：Summoning up my courage, I approached him slowly and explained how I started the rumour and apologized sincerely. With regretful tears streaming down my face,I couldn't imagine how could I deal with it. (Del was sitting alone--) 优化2：The sight of his isolated/ lonely figure tugged at my heartstrings. Ashamed and embarrassed, I took a deep breath, approached him inch by inch and sat beside him. 形容词作状语 Knowing the reason why others stayed away from him Del was a little angry but he also realized his former rude behaviour and forgave me. 要展现！ 优化3：Del's eyes widened slightly, and for a moment, he just stared at me, as if trying to process my words. "Thanks, Jamie," he said quietly . "I appreciate you telling me that. I forgive you." 眼睛动作，似乎（as if揣摩别人心里）,语气温和，对话 To make others know the truth, I gathered them in the classroom and acknowledged my mistake. 优化4: I approached the players and asked them to stop for a moment. Everyone, including Del, was surprised. I admitted that it was I who started the rumour. “Del did not beat up anyone.” I said. Upon hearing this, the players were confused for a brief moment but soon figured out what had really happened. “Hey, welcome back.” They waved to Del. Del nodded willingly. Seeing Del playing the game as usual, I felt relieved that I eventually mended a big mistake. “我”告诉大家真相，大家重新接受Del，问题得以解决。（强动词，对话） I felt a sense of guilt, a wave of depression washed over me. 优化5: Realizing what severe consequences my rumour had brought about, a wave of guilt and regret washed over me. To improve our relationship, Del also made great efforts that he no longer called me the nickname. 不要写别人的行事目的 Their hateness hatred gave way to guilty after I told them the truth. Then they invited Del to play with them as before. 要展现！ Knowing the truth, a wave of guilty guilt flooded over them and they invited him to play with them. 视角 Hearing what I said, Del said with a smile." I don't know you have treated me as a bad boy. Now the misunderstanding was solved." 要有情绪转变的过程， 对话要口语化。 The weight of uncertainty guilt settled on my shoulders like a heavy blanket. After getting to understand why I apologized to him, instead of letting the anger getting the best of him, Del just forgave me with a slight smile, which made me relieved.要展现！ I sat beside Del and made a sincere apology to him. 要展现！ 丢失的20元钱 Filled with happiness and gratitude. I couldn't wait to rush rushed there in the hope of finding lost money. 情感过于激烈 优化13：I rushed there with a rapturous heart to collect my note. Through the assistant’s words I got the truth. With a mix of happiness and appreciation in mind, I burst in ... ...
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