(
课件网) 应用文写作指导 征文投稿 第一节(满分15分) 假定你是李华，学校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期学生社会实践活动的建议。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 活动建议； 2. 活动意义； 3. 你的期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, _____ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 投稿是向报刊、杂志、电(视)台有目的性地、具有较强针对性地发表自己看法的一种应用文体。常见的作文形式是“征文”和“参赛”，内容分为写人和叙事。 Analysis （审 题） 体裁 主题 时态 人称 1.一般现在时, 将来时 要点 征文投稿类应用文 2.第一人称 1.活动概述及建议； 2. 活动意义； 3. 你的期待。 暑期学生社会实践活动的建议。 the structure of the submission article 01 the submission article 02 the purpose of writing 03 Describe the specific situation. summary 交代背景，引出话题，点明主题 事件描述 期盼、祝福、呼吁等 社会实践活动 社会责任感 分享我的想法 提高人们的意识 指导居民进行…… 培养责任感 承担责任 实践经历 产生积极的影响 灌输...精神给学生 传递善意给... 磨练社交技能 Useful expressions social practice activities a sense of social responsibility share my ideas raise people’s awareness guide residents to do ... develop/foster /cultivate a sense of duty take/shoulder responsibility for... hands-on experiences make a positive impact instill...spirit to students spread kindness to... sharpen social skills 1.交代背景，引出话题/主题呈现 I’d like to submit / share an article entitled ....（主题）, which I’m sure will catch your attention. 我想提交一篇题为....的文章，我相信会引起你的注意。 v. 递交；主张；建议 I’d like to share my ideas on Core of English Writing Skills, which I’m sure will catch your attention. 我想分享一篇关于英语写作技巧的核心的文章，我相信会引起你的注意。 得知学校正征集暑期社会实践的建议，我想分享自己的想法，希望能为我们策划一次有意义的暑期活动出一份力。 Knowing the school is collecting suggestions for summer social practice , I’d like to share my ideas, hoping to contribute a little to a meaningful summer activity for us. 得知学校正在寻求暑期社会实践活动的想法，我迫不及待地想分享我的想法，让我们的假期变得有意义。 Learning the school is seeking ideas for summer social practice, I’m eager to share mine to make our vacation meaningful. 听说学校正在收集一场别开生面的暑期社会实践活动的建议，我难掩激动之情地分享我的想法。 参考句式：Hardly could I hide my excitement to share my ideas when hearing... Hardly could I hide my excitement to share my ideas when hearing our school is collecting suggestions about a unique summer social practice. 2.活动概述、活动过程和意义 建议句型： 1 I would like to suggest / propose / 2 recommend that... I believe it would be beneficial to... 3 Perhaps it would be worth considering... 4 I think it might be helpful to... 5 I recommend adding... to enhance 6 It might be advisable to... 7 I suggest revising the... to make it more concise. 8 It is worth noting that... 9 We could consider the option of ... 2.活动概述、活动过程和意义 1.我建议开展一个“社区环境保护活动” ... ...
