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课件网) 读后续写 高分微技巧 深刻的心理描写,让人物栩栩如生 细致的心理描写可以深入刻画人物的性格,表现人物丰富而复杂的思想感情。 一、心理描写的方法 心理描写可以揭示人物的内心世界,表现人物的性格、特点、感情、思想等。心理描写可以运用直接描写和间接描写两种方法。 1.直接描写:直接写人物的想法、感受、打算等,在具体写作时,可用“I felt”“she thought”“he would”等。 2.间接描写:人物的性格不同,情绪不同,其所表现出的动作和神态也就不同。因此,可以利用人物的动作和神态体现人物的心理,也可以利用语言描写体现人物的心理。 二、高分素材 1.开心、幸福 (1)His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐的光芒。 (2)The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 (3)She cracked a sweet smile. 她露出了甜蜜的微笑。 (4)Wild gaiety took hold of her. 她感到一阵狂喜。 (5)Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。 (6)A sense of joy and happiness suddenly surged inside him. 他的内心突然涌现出一种喜悦和幸福的感觉。 (7)It seemed as if the baby were on top of the world/were floating on air. 小宝宝看起来非常开心。 (8)Her face lit up/brightened/glowed with pleasure when I gave her the present. 当我给她礼物时,她喜笑颜开。 (9)Laughter lingered around the room. 笑声在房间里回荡。 (10)That moment of triumph, when I brought the canoe through the canal to the creek, was the greatest joy I have ever felt in my life. 我划着独木舟通过运河到达小溪的这一胜利时刻,是我一生中所感受到的最大的快乐。 2.恐惧、害怕 (1)He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转向我,眼里充满了恐惧。 (2)A huge shark was swimming towards him, its eyes on fire and its jaws open. I was speechless with horror and unable to move. 一条大鲨鱼朝他游去,眼露凶光,张着嘴。我吓得说不出话来,动弹不得。 (3)The night before the test I was overcome/overwhelmed/consumed with anxiety. 考试的前一晚,我焦虑不安。 (4)On my way home, I was terrified, glancing behind me time after time, seeing human shapes behind every tree.在回家的路上,我非常惊恐,一次又一次地回头看,看到每棵树后面都有人的影子。 (5)My throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 我喉咙发紧,双膝发软。 (6)I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 我吓呆了,一动也不敢动。 (7)The terrible scene sent shivers down my spine. 那可怕的场面使我脊背发凉。 (8)Her face turned pale and she stood there tongue-tied. 她脸色苍白地站在那里,说不出话来。 (9)He stiffened. The smile faded from his lips, and his face turned pale. His hands trembled. 他的身体变得僵硬。笑容从他的嘴角慢慢消失,脸色变得苍白,双手在颤抖。 (10)You can imagine the terror I felt. I would have leaped out of the barrel and run away, if I hadn't been frozen with fear. 你可以想象我当时有多害怕。如果不是因为吓呆了,我早就从桶里跳出来逃跑了。 3.愤怒、生气 (1)The way they treated animals made my blood boil.他们对待动物的方式令我非常气愤。 (2)Her face clouded over with anger.她满脸怒气。 (3)My voice sounds like a growling, angry bear. 我的声音听起来像一只愤怒的熊在咆哮。 (4)His voice trembled with anger. 他的声音因愤 ... ...