第一讲续写文本解读讲义素材——2025年高考真题专项-2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

第一讲 续写文本解读———2025年高考真题专项 一、解读核心逻辑 读后续写需遵循 “情节连贯、情感递进、主题升华” 三大原则，通过分析原文双线（情节线 + 情感线）、紧扣段首句、运用细节描写，实现故事自然延伸与正能量收尾。 二、2025 年高考真题实战解读（全国 Ⅰ 卷） （一）真题原文 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had always prided myself on having a neat and tidy house. Every item had its place, and I couldn’t stand clutter of any kind. So when my brother Mark asked if he could stay with me for a month after his wife passed away, I agreed—but with a strict rule: his golden retriever Toby, who shed constantly, must stay outdoors. Mark had been through so much. His wife Lisa’s sudden death had left him heartbroken, and he’d recently lost his job too. Toby was his only comfort, following him everywhere. But I couldn’t bear the thought of dog hair on my clean carpets and sofas. “I’m sorry, Mark,” I said firmly, “but Toby can’t come inside. There’s a dog house in the backyard—he’ll be fine there.” Mark’s face fell, but he nodded silently. For the first two weeks, everything went as I’d hoped. Mark kept the backyard tidy, and Toby never tried to sneak in. But I noticed Mark was growing quieter. He’d spend hours sitting on the porch with Toby, staring into space. One evening, I found him crying softly while hugging the dog. My heart twinged, but I reminded myself: rules are rules. Then one rainy night, I woke up to a loud crash. Rushing downstairs, I found Mark lying on the kitchen floor—he’d slipped on a wet patch and hit his head. Panicked, I called an ambulance. As we waited, Mark grabbed my hand weakly. “Toby... he’s outside in the rain,” he whispered. “I’m so worried about him.” I froze. That’s when I realized how selfish I’d been. 注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。 1.I realized it was me who was at fault. 2.With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. （二）文本双线深度解析 维度 具体内容 核心人物 “我”（注重整洁、内心自私）、Mark（丧妻失业、情感脆弱）、Toby（精神寄托） 故事背景 哥哥 Mark 遭遇双重打击后投奔弟弟，因宠物狗引发居住矛盾 情节线 同意哥哥暂住→立下禁狗规则→哥哥沉默抑郁→哥哥意外受伤→“我” 幡然醒悟 情感线 “我”：固执坚持→轻微动摇→愧疚自责→主动弥补；Mark：期待→失落→绝望→释然 核心冲突 “我” 的 “整洁规则” 与 Mark 的 “情感需求” 之间的矛盾 主题指向 亲情至上、共情理解、放下执念 （三）段首句解构与情节构思 1.第一段首句：I realized it was me who was at fault. 核心要求：聚焦 “我” 的内心转变，从 “自责” 到 “行动决心” 情节构思路径： ① 反思错误：承认自己因执念忽视哥哥痛苦（细节：想起哥哥抱狗痛哭的场景） ② 共情理解：意识到 Toby 对哥哥的特殊意义（失去妻子后的唯一陪伴） ③ 下定决心：打破规则，弥补过错（具体行动：雨中接回 Toby，准备道歉） 2.第二段首句：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. 核心要求：展现 “和解过程”，情节真实、情感真挚 情节构思路径： ① 见面场景：紧张忐忑的心理描写（敲门、等待回应的细节） ② 真诚道歉：表达内心 ... ...