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课件网) 专题六 读后续写 第二节 如何打磨续写语言 一、丰富的句式运用 1.非谓语动词 ①(2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure. 我和他紧紧地握了握手,随即跳下车,疯狂地向公共汽车跑去,在发 车前跳上了车。 ②(2023·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. 他的话让我深受鼓舞,我同意试一试。 对点精练 完成句子 ① (2025·全国二卷)我站起身来,感到既紧张又兴奋。 _____, I felt a mix of nervousness and excitement. Standing up ② 被困在南瓜里,我感到呼吸困难,喉咙发干,脸发烫。 _____, I found it difficult for me to breathe, my throat dry and face burning. Trapped in the pumpkin 2.独立主格 ①(2025·全国二卷)As I spoke, I noticed the complete attention of my classmates, their eyes reflecting curiosity and respect. 我讲话的时候注意到同学们全神贯注的样子,他们的眼神流露出好奇 和敬意。 ②(2023·浙江1月卷)It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on me as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. 那只鸟似乎在等着我,它那炯炯有神的眼睛盯着我,仿佛在试图表达 某种深深的、不言而喻的感激之情。 ③To our delight, David crossed the finish line smoothly, his face shining with a satisfied smile. 令我们高兴的是,戴维顺利地冲过了终点线,他的脸上洋溢着满足的 笑容。 对点精练 完成句子 ① (2025·全国二卷)他们包围着我,问题如溪流般涌出。 They surrounded me, _____. their questions pouring out like a stream ② 所有的眼睛都注视着我,我试图清清嗓子说点儿什么,但却只能感 受到我怦怦跳动的心。 _____, I tried to clear my throat to utter something, but what I could feel was my thumping heart. All eyes fixed on me ③ 我的心狂跳不止,我僵立在漆黑的走廊里,吓得寸步难移。 _____, I stood frozen in the dark hallway, too scared to move an inch. Heart pounding wildly 3.主从复合句 ①(2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)The moment Gunter picked up the phone, he seemed to know that I was going to call and said softly, “I know it's you.” Gunter一拿起电话,他似乎就知道是我打来的,并轻轻地说:“我知道是 你。” ②It was at that moment that I couldn't help thinking of my teacher, who encouraged me to try again and again.就在那一刻,我不禁想 起了我的老师,他鼓励我一次又一次地尝试。 ③One evening, I picked up the phone and left him a voice message, apologizing for my behavior and asking if we could meet. 一天晚上,我拿起电话,给他留了一条语音留言,为自己的行为道歉, 并问他是否可以见面。 对点精练 完成句子 ① (2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)那个时候,我觉得自己很幸运,遇到了 Gunter这样一个热心肠的人,他有一颗金子般的心。 At that time, I felt blessed to have met such a warm-hearted man like Gunter _____(限制性定语从句). who has a heart of gold ② 结果证明这是一次有益的经历,我从中不仅收获了快乐,而且认识 到努力的价值。 It turned out to be a rewarding experience, _____ _____(非限制性定语 从句). from which I not only harvested joy, but also learned the value of efforts ③ (2024·浙江1月卷)在又跑了 ... ...