第二讲 咨询类 (2025·全国二卷)假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章，请给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．询问进度； 2．提醒交稿时间。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Chris， _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ Best wishes， Li Hua 一、教你审题 1．明确任务类型：这是一封邮件写作，属于应用文中的书信类，需注意格式(开头 Dear Chris，结尾 Best wishes，Li Hua)和语气(礼貌、委婉)。 2．抓住核心要求： 内容要点：询问文章进展＋提醒交稿时间。 人称/时态：第一人称和第二人称；以现在时为主。 词数限制：80词左右，需简洁明了。 3．关注细节： 写信人是校英文报编辑李华； 收件人是外教Chris，语言需礼貌得体，避免生硬催促； 需提及“加拿大体育运动”这一主题，体现针对性。 二、教你构思 1．快速确定写作框架 Reminder Beginning Greeting & Expressing gratitude Body Part 1：Inquiring about the progress of the article politely Part 2：Giving a friendly reminder about the submission time Ending Making a concise and positive ending 2．内容拓展与细节填充 Inquiring about the progress of the article politely How's ...coming along？ Could you give me a brief update on ...？ Just checking in to see how things are progressing with ... I'm really looking forward to the article． Could you please let me know when I can expect to receive it？ Giving a friendly reminder about the submission time Friendly reminder: the submission deadline is... Just a gentle reminder about the submission time． May I kindly remind you of the submission deadline？ This is to friendly remind you that the submission time is approaching． Please note the submission deadline: ... A friendly heads-up on the submission time: ... 三、教你成文 Dear Chris， I hope you're doing well．Thank you again for agreeing to write the article on Canadian sports last month! (问候＋背景＋感谢) I'm writing to follow up on its progress．Could you please let me know how it's going？(询问进展) Just a friendly reminder that the submission deadline is June 30．We'd truly appreciate it if you could share your draft by then to allow time for editing．(提醒交稿时间) Thank you for your support! Please feel free to reach out if you need assistance．Looking forward to reading your article! (再次感谢＋表达期待) Best wishes， Li Hua 四、教你出彩 Dear Chris， I hope this email finds you well．(开头更正式：用“I hope this email finds you well”替代口语化的“I hope you're doing well”)Thank you once again for your kind agreement to contribute (词汇更丰富) the article on Canadian sports last month—we truly value your expertise(强调专业性：增加“we truly value your expertise”突出对对方的尊重)! I'm writing to follow up on its progress．Could you please update (使用update使语言较正式) me on its current status As a gentle reminder (将“friendly reminder”改为“gentle reminder”，更符合正式邮件用语)，the submission deadline is June 30．To ensure smooth editing and timely publication，(逻辑更清晰：补充“to ensure smooth editing and timely publication”解释注意截止时间的重要性)we'd truly appreciate ... ...
