第三讲 演讲类 (2025·浙江1月卷)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1．陈述看法； 2．提出建议。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 My views on filming short videos on campus _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ 一、教你审题 1．明确任务类型：这是一篇演讲稿，属于应用文中的发言稿类，需注意口语化和号召力。 2．抓住核心要求： 内容要点：对校园拍摄短视频现象的看法＋具体建议。 人称/时态：第一人称和第三人称；以现在时为主。 词数限制：80词左右，需简洁有力。 格式要求：以“My views on filming short videos on campus”为标题。 3．关注细节： 针对“部分同学”的行为，语气需客观，避免绝对化批评。 建议需具体可行，体现建设性。 二、教你构思 1．快速确定写作框架 Lecture Beginning Background information Body Expressing views，including the positive and negative aspects Offering suggestions: time management，respect for others and content direction Ending Advocating for responsible smartphone use 2．内容拓展与细节填充 Expressing views acknowledge the positive aspects (such as documenting life and showcasing creativity) point out potential issues (like disrupting studies or violating privacy) allow us to preserve memories and express creativity be mindful not to let it interfere with academic responsibilities or compromise others' privacy Offering suggestions It's advisable to film during break times or after-school hours． Always obtain consent before filming others to avoid disturbance． We should encourage creating educational and meaningful video content． 三、教你成文 Good morning，everyone! A lot of students have been using their mobile phones to take short videos on campus．(背景陈述，表达观点) It has remarkable advantages．(列举好处) For example，it offers a vivid and creative way to record precious moments of school life，like memorable classroom discussions or exciting sports events．It does have disadvantages．(说明弊端) It may easily distract us from studying as we might get overly absorbed in filming and editing．We should set strict time limits for shooting，say，no more than 30 minutes a day．(提出条件)We must ensure the content is positive，such as sharing study tips or acts of kindness． I call upon everyone to use our smartphones wisely and responsibly．(发出倡议) 四、教你出彩 Good morning，everyone! In recent days (加上时间状语，增加真实性)，an increasing number of (词汇更加丰富)students have been using their mobile phones to shoot (使语言地道)short videos on campus． On the one hand(使用连接词，使层次清晰)，it has remarkable advantages．For example，it offers a vivid and creative way to capture fun moments (动词短语增强表现力)of school life，like memorable classroom discussions or exciting sports events．On the other hand(使用连接词，使层次清晰)，it does have disadvantages．It may easily distract us from studying as we might get overly absorbed in filming and editing．To make better use of this activity (使用非谓语动词短语，增加句式的丰富性，使衔接更加紧密)，we should set ... ...
