【教师备课专用】2021届通用版高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式学案：专题09人生与情感Word版含解析

12204700110617002021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦09 人生与情感 【真题再现】 （2016年，浙江卷）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。 要求如下： 1.简述你对这句名言的理解； 2.用一个具体事例加以说明； 3.给出恰当的结尾。 注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）： 2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。 Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better 【参考范文】 Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined. 【解析】 本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。?考点：考查开放式作文 【范文点评】 本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简洁，时态、人称准确，很好地完成了写作任务。在文章开头，作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施非常重要。在文中，作者用到了短语in detail, bear no fruit,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章表达的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do和how I achieved my success,以及句型It came from good planning and better doing combined等，这些都给文章增加了亮点。 【经典演练1】 一家英语报社向中学生征 文，主题是”Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. ”。请根据自己对这句话的理解,按以下要求写一篇英语短文。 要点包括：1.这句话的意义；2.举例说明；3.结论。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [高分范文] A well-known proverb goes that " Genius is nothing but labor and diligence" ,which tells us that labor and diligence play a significant role if we want to be successful. At the beginning of Senior Grade One,I was known for getting high marks in exams without working hard，on account of which I was regarded as a genius by my classmates. I had been proud of this for a long time until a girl named Lily appeared. She was very common at first, but she studied very hard and got higher marks than me in one exam. Since then, she has been ranking first in the whole grade. Apparently ,it is her lab ... ...