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课件网) Unit11 Writing My Unforgettable Experience Disco Warm-up Repeat it aloud! Act it out! 某英文网站正举办以 ”My Unforgettable Experience” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你叙述发生在校园里的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感受。 注意:(1)词数：80--100;(2)短文开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数；(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。 短文开头：The school life in junior high is coming to an end, but there is one thing that I'll never forget. examining(审题) style(体裁) person (人称) tense(时态) key points(要点) A. narration(记叙文) B. argumentation(议论文) C. description(说明文) narration A.the first person B.the second person C.the third person the first person A.the present tense B.the future tense C.the past tense the past tense 1)an experience 2)feelings 1 Careful examining is the first step to the writing. lucky, unforgettable How feelings process(过程) effect(结果) cause(起因) the experience When Where Who What in the classroom during an exam Paul & James wanted to cheat put hands on..., said... took Paul's advice Reading 2 The narration should include “When, where, who and what ( clause, process, effect),how...” My Unforgettable Experience The school life in junior high is coming to an end, but there is one thing that I'll never forget. During an exam, I heard a low voice from behind. I turned back and saw my friend, James. He wanted to have a look at my answers. I put my hands on my paper. So he couldn‘t see my answers at all. After the exam, James looked upset. For a moment, I stood there and wondered what to say. “ Don’t worry, James. Let me help you with your study.” “Thanks, Paul. You‘re right.” It was lucky that our friendship wasn’t over. This was really an unforgettable experience! Beautify 1. I turned my head and saw my friend, James. I turned my head quickly and saw my friend, James.. 2. It was lucky that our friendship wasn't over. _____, our friendship wasn't over. 3. He wanted to have a look at my answers. _____, I put my hands on my paper. So he couldn't see my answers at all. 4. For a moment, I stood there and wondered what to say. For a moment, I stood there, _____ what to say. He now treats everyone with kindness and warmth, spreading love and joy everywhere he goes. We often just walk around the town, seeing as many of our friends as we can. Luckily Without thinking twice wondering (add advs.) (add phrases 词组) (use concomitant adverbials伴随状语) Beautify 5. I saw my friend, James. He wanted to have a look at my answers. I saw my friend, James who wanted to have a look at my answers. 6. I put my hands on my paper and he couldn’t see the answers at all. I put my hands on my paper _____he couldn't see the answers at all. 7. After the exam, James looked upset. After the exam, James was upset _____. 8.This was really an unforgettable experience. _____ this experience was! (use exclamatory sentence感叹句) so that How unforgettable (use attributive clause 定 ... ...
