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课件网) 暑假课件--初高中英语衔接 初高中英语衔接之读后续写篇 前言 初中英语写作以应用文为主,针对记叙文的写作训练较少,学生刚刚进入高一,面临新高考改革后的新题型写作,往往对于已给文本的把握没有方向,续写内容较为空洞,语言表达单一,情节不够连贯,故事性不强(故事续写不完整),大部分学生无法达到读后续写的标准。读后续写是我国高考英语写作的一种新题型,它符合语言学习规律,能有效促进英语的学习,体现了学生的综合语言运用能力。在读后续写能力培养中“以读促写”作为重要的英语写作教学方式,同样体现出其作用和影响。从情节推进到情感冲突的文本重点,从Story Mountain“故事山”到思维导图的篇章分析,多角度探讨新题型的有效教学思路。 CONTENTS 题型分析 01 案例分析 02 续写建议 03 01 题型分析 读后续写的题型特点 逻辑性 创造性 读后续写题型:提供一段350词之内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。 丰富性 题型分析 01 题型分析 01 读后续写的能力要求 题型分析 01 01 段落要求:给定的段落开头能引导故事延续,又防止天马行空的想象。 读后续写的命题特点 读后续写文章题材选择以记叙文为主。文章信息完整,既可以提炼出要点,又要给续写留出余地,此类文章故事性强,情节有起伏,内容连贯,逻辑性强,结构清晰,结尾处有结局或者感慨、总结等。 02 案例分析 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 watch TV watch TV practice the violin 案例分析 02 Once upon a time, there lived a girl named Walk. She was a good girl, but she never liked her name as all the kids around her made fun of her name. She ran away from everybody who laughed at her name, so Walk never really had friends. She would play alone all the time. One day, Walk went to her favorite place near the river behind her house, where she always spoke to the river in her own way. Today, when talking to the river, she said, “You are so fortunate, as you get to travel to different places and always be with your friends--ducks, turtles, fishes, and plants. I wish I had more friends and wouldn't be alone anymore.” When she was bored talking to the river, she picked up some stones and tried to skip(打水漂) them across the river like her dad did. However, she failed most of the time. Finally, she found a perfect stone. She held it tightly in her fingers, and said to the river, “Oh, dear river, if I could skip this stone all the way across, I would wish for a dear friend just like you.” Saying this, Walk waved her arm back just like her dad had taught her and threw the stone with full strength. watch TV watch TV practice the violin 案例分析 02 She watched the stone skip once, twice... and to her amazement, the stone went on skipping and eventually, on the seventh skip, made it across the river onto the shore of the opposite side. Walk was totally amazed. She could not just believe her eyes. Her deep thoughts and happiness were disturbed when she heard footsteps coming towards her. Walk looked around and found a little girl was rolling down towards her. Walk panicked and hurried to get up to hel ... ...