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课件网) Continuation Writing Free Talk Let’s set off! Now read for story elements! Read for story elements Elements (5W1H) Who When Where What Why How Onyx (a homeless dog) ,Margie(my daughter ), I One day In the pond in front of our house No one in the family was free.I am not a good swimmer,so I told her to take Onyx with her. How did my daughter get out of danger My daughter swam and her leg hurt,and the situation is very dangerous. He was the prettiest homeless dog we had ever seen at the shelter, we immediately fell in love with him and decided to give him a permanent home. Our ten-year-old daughter,Margie,named him Onyx because of his thick, shiny black coat. When we adapted him,Onyx was only ten weeks old and we had no idea that this amazing little baby dog would end up being our hero. As he grew older, Onyx became more and more involved in our family activities.He particularly loved swimming with us on hot summer days. He would float in the river in his own rubber tube(橡皮圈).Sometimes, he would stand on the top of the tube with a big smile and show off his perfect balance. Otherwise, he would rest his front legs over the edge of the rubber tube and keep his eyes shut as he floated until he had enough of the warm sun on his thick, black coat. Explore the clues One day,Margie announced she was going to swim in the pond in front of our house. But it happened that no one in the family was free to go swimming with her that day. The unwritten rule in my family,regardless of swimming ability, was to have a companion in the water, I was not a good swimmer, so I said to Margie,“Take Onyx with you.” Having heard his name,Onyx jumped to his feet and was ready for action.Margie signaled him to follow and they rushed to the water together. However, I still felt uneasy at the moment. I went to the doorway and watched them reach the pond. They rested on the shore for a few minutes before diving into the water and started swimming side by side. Suddenly I heard Margie calling out,“Help! My leg hurts!” we met a pretty homeless dog,and we immediately _____ and named him_____ Onyx particularly _____on hot summer days. fall in love with him Onyn One day,Margie wanted to go swim,but _____ with her.I am not a_____,so I told her_____. A few minutes later,they_____and _____. Suddenly I heard Margie calling out,_____. Beginning Development 1 Development 2 Climax After they were_____on the shore,I_____ tightly. . … Ending loved swimming with us no one was free to go swimming they dived into water started swimming side by side safe Explore the clues good swimmer take Onyx with her “Help!My leg hurts!” hugged them Climax Ending Emotion What happened Emotions We met a homeless dog and adapted him a home. Margie announced she was going to swim in the pond in front of our house. No one in the family was free.I am not a good swimmer,so I told her to take Onyx with her. Happy Margie,named him Onyx because ... ...
