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课件网) Write a letter of advice Reading for writing Lead in What do you think of your life in senior high I think my life in senior high is… exciting/wonderful/relaxing/colorful/fulfilling/busy/tiring/challenging… Reading for information a letter of _____ advice from_____ to_____ Susan Luo Worried Friend Para.1 You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. What is Worried Friend’s problem Did Susan Luo understand him How do you know understanding Para.2 I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend. The _____and _____of Susan Luo reasons What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. It is advice /suggestions Supporting reasons acceptable persuasive Para.1 Para.2 Reading for organization and language Date Greeting Body Close Signature problems understanding reasons advice belief/hope Other expressions: Hearing/knowing/learning that... Having learned/known that… I feel terribly sorry to hear/ know/ learn that ... Other expressions: I know well how it feels to ... I know you didn't mean to ... I know you have trouble in ... It happens to everyone. Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong. Other expressions: Why don't you ... You’d better do… How about… I’d like to suggest… What do you think… My advice is/would be… It might be a good idea to… It is advisable/recommended that… first, second, third,… first of all and then besides what’s more as well last but not least finally in the end Linking words Hope you will… I am looking forward to... I hope you’ll take my advice into account. I think you will find these suggestions useful. I will be delighted if you find my suggestions useful. Discussion suggestions reasons Discuss with your partner about Eric’s problem and list possible suggestions and reasons. Possible answers: ... ...
