Unit 2 Growing pains and gains书面表达10篇 （单元话题：成长的烦恼与收获） 学校:_____姓名：_____班级：_____考号：_____ 参考答案 1．范文： Saturday, October 12th Sunny Today I had a special experience that made me understand a lot of things. I made a promise to my mother that I would be back home before 9 pm, but I was late. On my way home, I realized my phone was at my friend’s home. When I went back to get it, I saw an elderly woman with a pale face under a street lamp — she was lost. I took her to the police station and waited until she found her family. I felt sorry for breaking my promise, but I was happy to help her. My mother was cross with me at first, but she was proud of me after knowing the truth. I learn that we should keep our promise, and we should also help others when they are in need. [总体分析] ①题材：日记。 ②时态：一般过去时为主（记录事件），一般现在时（表达感受和理解）。 ③提示：按时间顺序写晚归原因、帮助老人过程，表达愧疚与自豪，并谈对“信守承诺”和“善意助人”的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步：用1-2句承接开头，说明晚归原因（帮助老人）。 第二步：描述事件经过，表达矛盾心情。 第三步：总结对“承诺”与“助人”的理解，强调两者平衡的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①made a promise 许诺 ②on one’s way home在回家的路上 ③break one’s promise 违背诺言 ④be proud of 为……感到自豪 [高分句型] ①I made a promise to my mother that I would be back home before 9 pm, but I was late.（that引导的同位语从句；but连接表转折关系的并列句） ②I took her to the police station and waited until she found her family.（until引导时间状语从句） 2．例文 The Resolution Made Me Better I’ve made many resolutions in the past two years. There’s no doubt that if I never give up, the resolutions can make me better. One of my most unforgettable resolutions was in my Grade 7. In my final examination, I received a terrible score. I was so afraid of facing my parents. It reminded me that I used to play on my phone while doing my homework. It made me feel ashamed. When parents talked with me in the evening, I made a silent resolution. I decided to hand the phone over to Mum. At the beginning, it was hard to control myself. Gradually, I got used to doing my homework without the phone. Now, I fall in love with basketball instead. When I finish studying, I like to play it with my friends. I got to know, as long as I stick to my resolution, everything is possible. [总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：完整覆盖三个核心问题———决心内容、制定原因、带来的改变，同时补充细节使行文连贯，满足词数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，介绍核心观点； 第二步：详细阐述决心的背景、内容与执行； 第三步：总结改变与感悟，升华全文。 [亮点词汇] ①unforgettable难忘的 ②ashamed羞愧的 ③gradually逐渐地 ④stick to坚持 [高分句型] ①It reminded me that I used to play on my phone while doing my homework.（宾语从句） ②I got to know, as long as I stick to my resolution, everything is possible.（条件状语从句） 3．例文： Never be afraid of difficulties In our life, everyone ... ...
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